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RaiderNation
02-23-2010, 12:01 AM
Please dont come in here and mess around with dumb rhymes. This is intended for people to show their talents with rhyming...

Heres one I did earlier today. I did it to the Forever beat by Drake, Lil Wayne, Eminem and Kayne West

If you **** with me, I'll **** right back at you
You need get your ass outta here, get a blues clue
Cuz I bet you never knew, that I'm the best
Only good rapper out here, in the west
And northern cali, ya, I call that my ******* nest
All you do is fail, please go retake the test
Your still here?, damn your pest
Don't **** around with me, I will go crazy like Ron artest
Ya I'm like Drake, I got money to blow
I'm about 3 times better than you, listen to my flow
After I'm done with a song, the crowd goes bravo
And trust me, I don't go ****
My money compared to yours, makes you look like a hobo
So please get the memo, cuz when I make it rain, at the end theres always a rainbow...

ccB
02-23-2010, 12:28 AM
It's CCB I'll go jackie chan on tramps/ have them like the man on the bus "call da amba lamps"


werrrrrrrrrrrrrrd

El Peefs?????
02-23-2010, 12:31 AM
It's CCB I'll go jackie chan on tramps/ have them like the man on the bus "call da amba lamps"


werrrrrrrrrrrrrrd

Damn you as good as kid n play.

ccB
02-23-2010, 12:33 AM
Damn you as good as kid n play.

You just made my night.

George Lippard
02-23-2010, 12:35 AM
That is a lot of est.

ccB
02-23-2010, 12:38 AM
"get a blues clue, oops i mean red clue, waynes here sooooooowooooop bet he felt that like the end of a pool cue"- Drake

Your not even original.

prock
02-23-2010, 12:47 AM
Here is a white boy rapping for you.

How's it going? That sounds swell!
How am I doing? I'm doing well!
I woke up at 7, made some toast
My picket fenced neighbors always boast
About their SUV, it's bigger than mine
But I don't confront, I like mine just fine :)

RaiderNation
02-23-2010, 01:07 AM
Added on to my first verse....

If you **** with me, I'll **** right back at you
You need get your ass outta here, get a blues clue
Cuz I bet you never knew, that I'm the best
Only good rapper out here in the west
And northern cali, ya, I call that my nest
All you do is fail, go retake the test
Your still here?, damn your pest
Don't **** around with me, I will go crazy like Ron artest
Ya I'm like drake I got money to blow
I'm about 3 times better than you, listen to my flow
After I'm done with a song, the crowd goes bravo
And trust me, I don't go ****
My money compared to yours makes you look like a hobo
So please get the memo , cuz i make it rain plus with a ******* rainbow
Trust me your gonna do what I say so....

Ya you know I'm the best, call me mr better
When I'm high I float like a feather
All it takes is one hit of my ****, like Floyd mayweather
So y'all better check , you can hate it or respect it
Cuz y'all know my flow bang harder than a smith and wesson
I'm the teacher, please follow my lesson
So Stick to the gameplan, and go get my money
I'm not messing around or trying to act funny
Go get that **** right now, or imma go good will hunting
3 and out you suck, your teams punting
So trust me I'm not stunting
When it comes to making dough, Im never fronting
I smoke weed, I'm always blunting...

I hope by now you have figured out my rhymes are raw
Check every single one, there's no flaws
There so hard you can't cut with a chainsaw
So give me the respect I deserve like a grandpa
Ya you know my moneys new, but I'm still spending old money
Everything I buy is sweet, just like honey
So tell your honey, she can be my playboy bunny
Cuz I can make it rain while it's still sunny
The weed I smoke it's called purple
It's a good plant, you can call it herbal
I smoke it slow, like a running turtle
I don't need to jump, I have no hurdles
Ya nothings in my way
I plan on keeping it that way
Repping the northern valley all the way to the bay...

thule
02-23-2010, 01:21 AM
i'm spittin some serious heat
still meat cleavin these beats
bloody as womens period sheets
i'm like f**kin Athens to Greece
see the importance of me to rap?
**********ker give me the map
the world, i'ma beast feast on my habitat
i'm startin to get my psycho habits back
doctors tellin me to chill out n relax
but the drugs tellin me i should relapse
fans sayin spit raps till i collapse
i'ma battle legend had to sharpen my axe
steadily destroyin everything in my path
its heavenly how i freestyle wit no rough draft
u try to stay afloat but i poke holes in ya raft
even ya best friend and ya girl know ya wack
lack of inspiration for the duration of this track
frustration in the words be makin this that crack
its in the delivery, it can be found in the flow
biblically chivalrys shown but shes still a hoe
head shes givin me makes me know shes a pro
dead prophets live in me watch their spirits glow
from Big to L to Pac to Pun to the Jam Master
stuff ur pockets run robbery makes u a rapper
i'll hold em hostage in texas, only flush shown is the crapper
drivin my Lexus, creep slow, better duck low before the disaster
shots fired, no thug, just a gunman for hire
spittin fire, soul burnin wit desire, micheal myers
of rap, burnin like line-locked tires, yall in esquire
hold the game with pliers, epic like the Roman Empire
why yall Epic Fails, like one of Mase's 5 comebacks
i could make that Gangster Gangster got my gun strapped
or that let's get drunk in the club, type fun tracks
Canibus, thousand bar type, rippin it cuz i run rap

fenikz
02-23-2010, 01:36 AM
I SPIT HOT FIREa

thule
02-23-2010, 02:11 AM
the only fire you spit is that from your d!ck
given bitches itches like you're yung berg giving da bizniz

Brown Leader
02-23-2010, 02:32 AM
Lightening Flash, it's all in the stash
make that yah foundation, unstable like a Haitian
This world heading free-form, straight to damnation
but yall jus wanna check what's on that next station
For that next track, for that extract
Wax poetic, until your **** can't breath
Free up yah ways, aesthetics and make believe
Our brothers in the concrete, axes and hammers
settin those souls free.
Left. Right. This choice will make ya life
Step down, until your ready to come
Right brain. We all deserve the same
One to one, this does not get played
this is not to entertain
Tell Vision, density maintained
One to the Earth, check the status you attain
Can't hear me? Trust the delivery like u at church...

KCJ58
02-23-2010, 02:34 AM
Yes I can.

thule
02-23-2010, 03:02 AM
Yes I can.

go down on a man
i'm not racists but
even if he is afrikan
my throats got a longer than average length span
and best yet
i got a no-gag gland

so we can pretend
that we are sweet like KCJ and his 10 character limit
or we can be like thule and spin it
because some people have talent
and others just fakin
if he's KC and JoJo
I'm 2pac - how do you want it

Hines
02-23-2010, 02:01 PM
I'll work her all day like my name Adrian Peterson
Call me the champ because I been eating my Wheeties son

TitleTown088
02-23-2010, 02:10 PM
I'll work her all day like my name Adrian Peterson
Call me the champ because I been eating my Wheeties son

You saying you'll drop her on the ground?
Son, who you fooling? you ain't got no dime to pound.

HawkeyeFan
02-23-2010, 03:38 PM
Nope, I cannot.

Chucky
02-23-2010, 03:40 PM
I am like a young Asher Roth.

slightlyaraiderfan
02-23-2010, 03:41 PM
First name eva/last name greatest
I'm so cleva/you're so whateva

Addict
02-23-2010, 03:55 PM
I never thought I'd say this but I miss JetsFan

TACKLE
02-23-2010, 10:38 PM
What the hell. I'll give it a shot.

Never stop grindin, Never stop rollin
I'm Adam Vinateri, I'm Super Bowlin
Game on the line I make it every time
You shootin like Shaq at free throw line.
See ya squintin while you tryin to take in my shine,
Readjust ya clocks cause know its my time
Got this game on lockdown, call me Primetime
Tryin to be the GOAT, Greatest of All-Time.
Like Sweetness,
Keep fightin, no weak s**t
with no weakness
Child please, don't try to beat this
Given birth to new rhymes like a fetis,
You know I did conceive this,
You cannot perceive this,
Try to knock me down I remain undefeated.

djp
02-23-2010, 11:23 PM
Think about it mon. Who are the 5 greatest rappers of all time?

TitansCJftw
02-23-2010, 11:26 PM
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Xonraider
02-24-2010, 12:20 AM
I can't rap for crap

RaiderNation
02-24-2010, 12:23 AM
I plan on recording my 3 verses tomarrow or the next day. Probably gonna put it on youtube and of course here.

thule
02-24-2010, 08:46 AM
I plan on recording my 3 verses tomarrow or the next day. Probably gonna put it on youtube and of course here.

u bore wit lectures wit no mic skills, y should i worry?
when ya malpractice raps getn buried, f**kin Conrad Murray

give it up, being a star is somethin u can never be
closest u'll get to it, is at a concert with flash photography

on record, u got a better chance spinning Dr. Peppers ock
wit a flow so flat, only title u worthy of, is the king of pop

but u kno what RaiderNation? theres always next year n ya remix game
where at least there u can be winner of ur own fukin DVD's, u lame
DC kno's im beatin u, leavin nothin but black n blue-prints
Mayweather to this De la Hoya, this lost u can't duck b**ch

im not jus abusing ur whole career raidernation, im also endin ya life
slicin u up wit the scalpel, then FedEx'n the rest to ya wife

EvilNixon
02-24-2010, 09:01 AM
I hope you guys don't quit your day jobs lol.

katnip
02-24-2010, 04:54 PM
I'll try some bars

ayo, I leave bodies cold n bloody
dead presidents couldn't even hold my money
step back or get jack by a bandit
so many damn bars, fools going dammit
see you ain't nice, you can't go toe to toe
any foes going down after one blow for blow
see I get my game on like butter n toast
so watch ya next step or get roast
coast to coast, it don't matter
I'm leaving fiends not wanting to holler
or steal they next dollar, I'm satan in form
packin pockets with dough, while these rappers makin me yarn

I tried

Hines
02-24-2010, 05:07 PM
You know I'm swaggin like my name Ike Taylor
I love my Oakland girl cuz she let me raider.

katnip
02-24-2010, 05:08 PM
so lastings milledge is still bench guy for pirates? or no?

Hines
02-24-2010, 05:09 PM
He's the starting LFer and possibly 5 or 6 hitter.