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  • #61
    Originally posted by Paul View Post
    An exceprt of something I wrote this back in high school for a poetry competition:

    Flourishing the hearts and minds of the spiritual renegade
    Fading into light with the sound of hymns of heavens gate
    Lifts the sons born in wind of the battle cry
    Fills the heartbeats that feed the deprived and tattered minds
    Revere the shells that shot from the mind of a genius
    Witness the birth, rise and the death of the new phoenix
    did you win that ****, cus that was fire

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    • #62
      I used to write poems, usually as songs back in high school.


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      • #63
        Originally posted by Paul View Post
        An exceprt of something I wrote this back in high school for a poetry competition:

        Flourishing the hearts and minds of the spiritual renegade
        Fading into light with the sound of hymns of heavens gate
        Lifts the sons born in wind of the battle cry
        Fills the heartbeats that feed the deprived and tattered minds
        Revere the shells that shot from the mind of a genius
        Witness the birth, rise and the death of the new phoenix

        damn thats good

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        • #64
          Originally posted by HinesWardJr View Post
          2pac was a poet
          go to barnes and noble or borders and u will find a book that he published with his poems that he wrote
          I know about his poems. I should have said I was referring to his music. I hate when people interpret his music as poetry. My bad on wording it incorrectly.

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          • #65
            Originally posted by bigbluedefense View Post
            I know about his poems. I should have said I was referring to his music. I hate when people interpret his music as poetry. My bad on wording it incorrectly.

            oh i know but i was just tellin u if u didnt know that
            the rapper that has rhymes that could be poetry is nas

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            • #66
              Originally posted by HinesWardJr View Post
              oh i know but i was just tellin u if u didnt know that
              the rapper that has rhymes that could be poetry is nas
              yea nas is like a poet,
              he is just striagt up nasty

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              • #67
                Originally posted by HinesWardJr View Post
                oh i know but i was just tellin u if u didnt know that
                the rapper that has rhymes that could be poetry is nas
                From what Ive heard, Nas has used one liners from famous poets often in his lyrics. Some purists look down on it, because he sort of takes credit for lines that he didn't create on his own.

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                • #68
                  Originally posted by bigbluedefense View Post
                  From what Ive heard, Nas has used one liners from famous poets often in his lyrics. Some purists look down on it, because he sort of takes credit for lines that he didn't create on his own.

                  ya but he also puts a twist to it
                  but he makes it hot

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                  • #69
                    damn i thought there was some more lyricists on this board.

                    no lyricist lounge

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                    • #70
                      Don't know If I won or not, it was one of those internet competitions I entered in. They never responded back.

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                      • #71
                        Originally posted by Paul View Post
                        Don't know If I won or not, it was one of those internet competitions I entered in. They never responded back.
                        well that was a waste of time for making that fire for nothing.
                        it was really good.

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                        • #72
                          heres two poems taht i wrote


                          "A Dance That Changed My Life"
                          Two people, one dance
                          This is the start of a beautiful romance
                          Been eyeing her all night, i had to find a song that fit just right
                          When we danced, i held you real tight
                          I was getting nervous, my heart beating fast
                          I prayed to god that this moment would last
                          Song ended, we said our goodbyes
                          Just being with her gave me butterflies
                          Later that night i asked if she could be my girl
                          She smiled, said yes, and it meant the world
                          A year later I gave her a ring and got on a knee
                          Then i quickly asked if she would marry me
                          She accepted then became my wife
                          I gotta thank the dance that changed my life



                          "The Kind Of Girl"

                          your the kind of girl who makes me fall in love
                          your the kind of girl who makes me thank the lord above
                          your the kind of girl who makes me get on a knee, give you a ring
                          your the kind of girl who is my everything
                          your the kind of girl who makes me change as a man
                          your the kind of girl who i will love with all i can
                          your the kind of girl who got all my attention
                          your the kind of girl who if in trouble, ill be your protection
                          your the kind of girl who is always on my mind
                          yoru the kind of girl thats so hard to find
                          your the kind of girl who makes me put the player status down
                          your the kind of girl that makes me happy, never a frown
                          your the kind of girl who makes me mean what i say
                          your the kind of girl who i wanna be with everyday
                          your the kind of girl who i want in my life
                          your the kind of girl who id make my wife
                          your the kind of girl who i would never say goodbye
                          your the kind of girl who i hope gives me another try

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                          • #73
                            and i make some sick hooks.

                            i cant find some of my previous rymes.

                            umm
                            i party longer than fat joe running 3 miles
                            i make styles p run out of styles

                            lol i know that one was pretty good but not that nasty

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                            • #74
                              Worst thread ever?

                              *shakes magic 8 ball*

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                              • #75
                                my favorite poet that s actualy job was a poet was langston huges

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